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My Fucked up Life
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My Fucked up Life
Some would say, my life is perfect
But if you look closer I'm full of neglect
Friends gettin' high, parents yellin'
At 16 I'm sure I'll be a convicted fellin
I'm the juvenile product of the working class
I feel my train is running low on gas
Burning chemicals, and lighting fires
At this rate I'll never hear Heavens choirs
With all the pressure it fells like hell
Satan himself is in my jail cell
Everwhere, my blood is spilling
To think of it, is bone chilling
Two sounds that I like
Are the click of a swithblade and a Moterbike
I have a fucked up life
Cause my head is under a sythe.
But if you look closer I'm full of neglect
Friends gettin' high, parents yellin'
At 16 I'm sure I'll be a convicted fellin
I'm the juvenile product of the working class
I feel my train is running low on gas
Burning chemicals, and lighting fires
At this rate I'll never hear Heavens choirs
With all the pressure it fells like hell
Satan himself is in my jail cell
Everwhere, my blood is spilling
To think of it, is bone chilling
Two sounds that I like
Are the click of a swithblade and a Moterbike
I have a fucked up life
Cause my head is under a sythe.
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Re: My Fucked up Life
all i have to say is keep swearing to mimimuim and work on ur poems, wasnt great rhymes were cheesy but ok,
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Re: My Fucked up Life
=> Moved to Poetry
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Re: My Fucked up Life
very cheerful poem...
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Re: My Fucked up Life
Thanks
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You are Welcome! And I can Tell your a "regular" student...
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