I dont care if this is demonic

Keep in mind this is how I uswed to feel.
Not now, now I have great friends


Can't you see
The pain in my eyes?
But this is me
And my life.
If you hold me close
You can hear my heart
It cries more than most
From being torn apart.
After every breath I take,
After every fight I witness,
I ask "why must I awake?"
Will I ever conquer forgiveness?
Can you ever truly
Forgive without forgetting?
I am lonely.
My life I am abandoning.
From pain I am running.
Even though these tears are streaming
I will never look back.
All in all,
I have one question to ask.
Would you still catch me if I fall?
Maybe one day you will see.
This is how I live,
And this is me.

ill let Demonic/Chimes- answer this one LMAO

XD Kaz
Well, its definitely not as demonic as some of mine.
I hope thats what you wanted to hear.
Its emotional, not neccasarily demonic.
Good job though

Loved it.

C/c: The line where it says "And I ask 'why must I awake?'" could be changed a little to make it flow a little better. Take the "a" off "awake". Word becomes "wake", which is still a word and flows a little better - "awake" has 1 too many syllables in my opinion.

Again though, great job. Better than me for sure...

Ok I agree about the syllabled
and u never know u could be great at writting

Personally, I think it was awesome, a little confusing but once I read it twice I understood it better. I'm a little slow today... maybe I took a few too many advils... uh-oh

lmao