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Hopeless
No stupid love song can describe how I feel
Sometimes the words other people say
Are never good enough or real
No one will ever know how I'm feeling today
I put my hopes up way too high
I thought you'd feel the same way
Now all I need to not do is cry
Because tears won't take the pain away
For a moment I thought you knew
For a moment I thought you cared
For a moment I thought you meant "I love you"
For a moment I thought you appreciated what we had
What do you know anyway?
You're just a guy
Have your fun today
And tomorrow make me cry
I'll fake my smile
I'll say I'm okay
I'll be happy for a while
And be dead inside
I kept on calling you sweet
Little did I know
Your love is the one thing I can't beat
I just can't seem to let you go!
You make me feel like such a fool
I don’t want to love you
Why did love have to be so cruel?
Why is there nothing that I can do?
Love can sometimes be great
That's something I cannot deny
But when it turns into hate
He won't be just "another guy"
He'll be the guy that broke you into pieces
He'll be the guy that made you a mess
He'll be the love that slowly ceases
After you finally confess
Listening to that song
Makes me feel like the stupidest girl alive
It made me realize that what I felt was wrong
Because I won't get you no matter how much I strive.
Sometimes the words other people say
Are never good enough or real
No one will ever know how I'm feeling today
I put my hopes up way too high
I thought you'd feel the same way
Now all I need to not do is cry
Because tears won't take the pain away
For a moment I thought you knew
For a moment I thought you cared
For a moment I thought you meant "I love you"
For a moment I thought you appreciated what we had
What do you know anyway?
You're just a guy
Have your fun today
And tomorrow make me cry
I'll fake my smile
I'll say I'm okay
I'll be happy for a while
And be dead inside
I kept on calling you sweet
Little did I know
Your love is the one thing I can't beat
I just can't seem to let you go!
You make me feel like such a fool
I don’t want to love you
Why did love have to be so cruel?
Why is there nothing that I can do?
Love can sometimes be great
That's something I cannot deny
But when it turns into hate
He won't be just "another guy"
He'll be the guy that broke you into pieces
He'll be the guy that made you a mess
He'll be the love that slowly ceases
After you finally confess
Listening to that song
Makes me feel like the stupidest girl alive
It made me realize that what I felt was wrong
Because I won't get you no matter how much I strive.
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Re: Hopeless
Great poem was great
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Re: Hopeless
thanks
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Re: Hopeless
Hopelessly awsum
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Re: Hopeless
Awesome you mean??
Not one of your greatest poems every Choni. Good, but not the best ever
Not one of your greatest poems every Choni. Good, but not the best ever
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Re: Hopeless
I realy enjoyed it.
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Thank you
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