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2 Poems (Both Short)
by Eissa_Me_Mario Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:04 pm
I know you're gonna say it's to short so I'm writting to short ones!!
#1 Trust Me:
trust in me
cause i know the pain
trust in me
cause i know the cold nights
trust in me
cause i know the lonliness
trust in me
cause i know my heart
trust in me
cause i know my soul
trust in me
cause i know what i give
trust in me
cause i know who i am
trust in me
cause i know what i want
trust in me
cause i know i can trust you! !
#2 You give me Strength:
You give me strength to live
You give me stength to love
You give me stength to laugh
You give me strength to learn
You give me strength to listen
You give me strength to leave
You give me strength to lift
You give me strength to do all things through you
Without you
I would probably be nothing
Without you
my life would probably be completely blue
and this is the honest truth
#1 Trust Me:
trust in me
cause i know the pain
trust in me
cause i know the cold nights
trust in me
cause i know the lonliness
trust in me
cause i know my heart
trust in me
cause i know my soul
trust in me
cause i know what i give
trust in me
cause i know who i am
trust in me
cause i know what i want
trust in me
cause i know i can trust you! !
#2 You give me Strength:
You give me strength to live
You give me stength to love
You give me stength to laugh
You give me strength to learn
You give me strength to listen
You give me strength to leave
You give me strength to lift
You give me strength to do all things through you
Without you
I would probably be nothing
Without you
my life would probably be completely blue
and this is the honest truth
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Re: 2 Poems (Both Short)
by Kazuma Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:20 pm
Okay.. and also I agree #2 was the better one~
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Re: 2 Poems (Both Short)
by Satanic Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:53 pm
In No1 i think u used ``trust me`` way 2 much
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Re: 2 Poems (Both Short)
by chung chin Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:08 pm
thats the point, to get the point across...
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Re: 2 Poems (Both Short)
by Ruri Sat Feb 28, 2009 6:56 am
#1 was the best I think.
Didn't like #2 so much
Didn't like #2 so much
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