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Do I Go?
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Do I Go?
My generation is the one that’s gonna make it right
We do it everyday, we do it every night
And we don’t wanna be the same as everybody was
We ain’t about the lies, we ain’t about the fuzz
I know that we can do it, anything you wanna have
We ain’t afraid to come together, ain’t afraid to laugh
So do it up your way, you wanna take the ride
You never run, you’ll never need to hide
I know you get it man, I know you understand
I got a feeling that you’re already in on the plan
Im everybody that you’ve ever met up until now
I wanna know the who, the why, the what, the where, the how
Do I go left?
Do I go right?
Gettin' through the day
To make it to the night
Do I go up?
Do I go down?
Which way do I go
To not hit the ground?
My generation is the one that’s gonna find a way
We do it every night, we do it every day
We'll come together and we'll make it a people decision
And then we'll learn to make a difference in the world we live in
Is greed the only way? I think that’s not the case
It’s really simple it comes down to a matter of taste
Only when you take the time to understand the human race
Then we'll have a moment to reflect, amazing grace
Crazed by history laced, challenges people have faced
Once you really know your self then that’s when you'll find your place
When you’re standing at the cross roads remember my verse
I know you’ll make it through the worst
Do I go left
Do I go right
Gettin' through the day
To make it to the night
Do I go up
Do I go down
Which way do I go
To not hit the ground
My generation is the one that’s gonna find the love
We’re looking down below, we’re looking up above
And everything you’ve ever wanted its all up to you
As long you know how to dream then your dream'll come true
All the potential that you’ve ever needed is around
Don’t be afraid of anybody that’s bringing you down
Do the things you wanna, do the things that keep you feeling great
I know you know its not too late!
We do it everyday, we do it every night
And we don’t wanna be the same as everybody was
We ain’t about the lies, we ain’t about the fuzz
I know that we can do it, anything you wanna have
We ain’t afraid to come together, ain’t afraid to laugh
So do it up your way, you wanna take the ride
You never run, you’ll never need to hide
I know you get it man, I know you understand
I got a feeling that you’re already in on the plan
Im everybody that you’ve ever met up until now
I wanna know the who, the why, the what, the where, the how
Do I go left?
Do I go right?
Gettin' through the day
To make it to the night
Do I go up?
Do I go down?
Which way do I go
To not hit the ground?
My generation is the one that’s gonna find a way
We do it every night, we do it every day
We'll come together and we'll make it a people decision
And then we'll learn to make a difference in the world we live in
Is greed the only way? I think that’s not the case
It’s really simple it comes down to a matter of taste
Only when you take the time to understand the human race
Then we'll have a moment to reflect, amazing grace
Crazed by history laced, challenges people have faced
Once you really know your self then that’s when you'll find your place
When you’re standing at the cross roads remember my verse
I know you’ll make it through the worst
Do I go left
Do I go right
Gettin' through the day
To make it to the night
Do I go up
Do I go down
Which way do I go
To not hit the ground
My generation is the one that’s gonna find the love
We’re looking down below, we’re looking up above
And everything you’ve ever wanted its all up to you
As long you know how to dream then your dream'll come true
All the potential that you’ve ever needed is around
Don’t be afraid of anybody that’s bringing you down
Do the things you wanna, do the things that keep you feeling great
I know you know its not too late!
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what the F is this doing in friggin Staff....
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You sure this isn't from a song this time Sat?
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Its not
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BUT it was rlly good
very nice job
very nice job
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Satanic... if you wanted to sumbit this for a contest.. I said PM me not post it on the forum. Now you still don't have an entry and I'm closing the Poetry Entries. So hurry
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That cool, I just wanted to share what I wrote. But thanks anyway!
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you couldn've shown what you wrote ... for money and a medal. Oh well hopefully your making it right now...
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What can you do?
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LMAO. Anyways nice poem. Way way better than Chimes- and Choni's. Wayyyyyy better!
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Thanks Man I liked it to
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I reely enjoyed writing it
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Pls comment
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dont double or triple post. Just edit your post instead of that.
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Didn't like it at all
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Why the hell not?
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Cause I didn't? There's no rule against having my own opinion...
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Thats fine, but what didn't you like, the rymese
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1) I don't know. It just didn't strike a chord with me.
2) It's spelled RHYMES
2) It's spelled RHYMES
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I DON'T CARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And just to tell you lol isn't a real word either
And just to tell you lol isn't a real word either
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Did I ever say "lol" was one? If I did, it's my mistake for being a hypocrite.
And I only mention the spelling as C/c. It's important (especially in forms of writing - like poetry) to have your words spelled correctly and used in the correct context.
And I only mention the spelling as C/c. It's important (especially in forms of writing - like poetry) to have your words spelled correctly and used in the correct context.
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Whatever!!
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This is do I go, by Evren. Stop stealing songs and saying they're your poems. Try to write your own poem.
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