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I belong to someone
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Re: I belong to someone
by Ruri Sun Mar 01, 2009 10:28 am
Nicely written
C/c: The syllables were all over the place, and it didn't really make the verses or lines seem like they belonged all together. A few did, and some belonged with some others, but as a whole it was all over the place.
Very true though
C/c: The syllables were all over the place, and it didn't really make the verses or lines seem like they belonged all together. A few did, and some belonged with some others, but as a whole it was all over the place.
Very true though
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Re: I belong to someone
by Kazuma Sun Mar 01, 2009 10:38 am
TOMMY:P:P:P:P
anyways nice poem... to lazy to write moar
anyways nice poem... to lazy to write moar
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