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Post by Satanic Mon Mar 16, 2009 5:57 pm

Some would say, my life is perfect
But if you look closer I'm full of neglect

Friends gettin' high, parents yellin'
At 16 I'm sure I'll be a convicted fellin

I'm the juvenile product of the working class
I feel my train is running low on gas

Burning chemicals, and lighting fires
At this rate I'll never hear Heavens choirs Twisted Evil

With all the pressure it fells like hell
Satan himself is in my jail cell

Everwhere, my blood is spilling
To think of it, is bone chilling

Two sounds that I like
Are the click of a swithblade and a Moterbike

I have a fucked up life
Cause my head is under a sythe.
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Post by Kazuma Wed Mar 18, 2009 5:56 pm

all i have to say is keep swearing to mimimuim and work on ur poems, wasnt great rhymes were cheesy but ok,
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Post by XtremeX17 Thu Mar 19, 2009 11:52 am

=> Moved to Poetry
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Post by 49hacker Tue Mar 24, 2009 2:39 pm

very cheerful poem...
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Post by Satanic Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:40 pm

Thanks
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Post by 49hacker Fri Mar 27, 2009 2:27 pm

You are Welcome! And I can Tell your a "regular" student...
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