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Love<3
by Eissa_Me_Mario Thu Feb 19, 2009 3:48 pm
I bet you wouldn’t know,
that she is scared to let people in.
That she doesn’t want to get hurt,
once again.
I bet you wouldn’t know,
that she wants to you care,
more than anything in the entire world.
Or that she gets butterflies everytime you touch her,
and her heart aches, everytime you aren’t with her.
Or maybe that she doesn’t want to fall for someone;
unless she is sure they are going to catch her.
All she wants, is for you to prove to her,
not all guys are the same.
And show her,
that you are different.
Would you know that she thinks that she should never give up
on someone she can’t go a day without thinking about?
Or how about that she thinks life is not about waiting for the storm to pass,
but learning to dance in the rain ?
Would you believe her, if she said,
I love you ?
that she is scared to let people in.
That she doesn’t want to get hurt,
once again.
I bet you wouldn’t know,
that she wants to you care,
more than anything in the entire world.
Or that she gets butterflies everytime you touch her,
and her heart aches, everytime you aren’t with her.
Or maybe that she doesn’t want to fall for someone;
unless she is sure they are going to catch her.
All she wants, is for you to prove to her,
not all guys are the same.
And show her,
that you are different.
Would you know that she thinks that she should never give up
on someone she can’t go a day without thinking about?
Or how about that she thinks life is not about waiting for the storm to pass,
but learning to dance in the rain ?
Would you believe her, if she said,
I love you ?
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Re: Love<3
by Kazuma Thu Feb 19, 2009 3:59 pm
Nice poem, I wonder what Demonic Creeper would say about it 
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Re: Love<3
by Eissa_Me_Mario Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:00 pm
hm,m i wonder
it was about somone in particular
it was about somone in particular
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Re: Love<3
by chimes- Thu Feb 19, 2009 7:26 pm
Wonderfully done Choni
I enjoy your poems.
And I bet you I could guess who the poem is about.
I enjoy your poems.
And I bet you I could guess who the poem is about.
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Re: Love<3
by Kazuma Fri Feb 20, 2009 2:15 pm
same here... someone both me and demonic creeper no very very well.
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Re: Love<3
by Zero Fri Feb 20, 2009 2:19 pm
wut... i'm left out of this discussion lol. Probably someone I don't know anywayzz
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Re: Love<3
by Eissa_Me_Mario Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:29 pm
I think I know who you think it is......and maybe I can't say
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Re: Love<3
by chimes- Fri Feb 20, 2009 5:53 pm
lol
J..o..e said that Britney Spears must of dedicated the song to him
J..o..e said that Britney Spears must of dedicated the song to him
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Re: Love<3
by Kazuma Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:05 am
that's so true very very true..
anyways back on topic anything else?
anyways back on topic anything else?
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by Eissa_Me_Mario Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:25 am
lmao darn womanizer 
him and brittney spears I can so see the resemblence :p
anyway.....
him and brittney spears I can so see the resemblence :p
anyway.....
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Re: Love<3
by Zero Sun Feb 22, 2009 12:38 pm
Getting of topic. Do all of you guys want a infraction or a ban for 2days. I dont think so.. so say on topic.
Anyways I think this poem is not good and you need to work on your content. It has no meaning just a bunch of words put together. work on it!
Anyways I think this poem is not good and you need to work on your content. It has no meaning just a bunch of words put together. work on it!
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Re: Love<3
by Eissa_Me_Mario Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:01 pm
Ok zero
i would honestly LOVE to see u right something that has a meaning other than too diss others
a poem would be great other than the fact that it would suck
and a 2 day ban bring it on it gives me time to put more buched of words together
i would honestly LOVE to see u right something that has a meaning other than too diss others
a poem would be great other than the fact that it would suck
and a 2 day ban bring it on it gives me time to put more buched of words together
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Re: Love<3
by Kazuma Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:07 pm
guys calm down... if any of you guys say something that is not related to this poem I'm closing it..
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Re: Love<3
by Eissa_Me_Mario Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:14 pm
Look I`m sorry but it was hard to pick up the courage to show ppl this and then someone says its bad im likely to get upset
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Re: Love<3
by Ruri Tue Feb 24, 2009 7:24 am
Yeah
But you have to understand that not everyone will like everything you do. It's a sad fact of life, and as they say: "everyone's a critic".
On a more positive note, another good poem Choni. Great work.
But you have to understand that not everyone will like everything you do. It's a sad fact of life, and as they say: "everyone's a critic".
On a more positive note, another good poem Choni. Great work.
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Re: Love<3
by Kazuma Tue Feb 24, 2009 1:50 pm
Thank you Ruri... read the rules about flaming and stuff.... critisism comes a lot with showing your work to the public... if you don't like peoples advice (even though it can hurt) then don't post it + seeing how people react to your poems is a great way to see how to improve your technique and content ... blah blah blah.. etc..
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Re: Love<3
by chung chin Tue Feb 24, 2009 6:45 pm
ummm i think i kno who its about but do i??? really good though, amazingly good!
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Re: Love<3
by Eissa_Me_Mario Wed Mar 04, 2009 5:21 pm
lmao
I know who u think its about but ur wrong!
well at least im like 80% positive
I know who u think its about but ur wrong!
well at least im like 80% positive
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