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Lalalalala
by chimes- Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:54 pm
There are times that I have heard the word no
There are times when things just wouldn't go
I hate the part at the end
When one of the main characters
Ends up dead
Sitting
Dying
At least I'm trying
Trying to snap
All of this darn
Crap
Apart
I see the light
At the end of the tunnel
I am the one moving
Stupid rocky funnel
Everything seems to be in the moment
I hate rhyming
Mirror mirror
On the wall
Who is the ______ of them all?
Make up your own adjective
I don't really care
This poem is crap
And so is my hair?
(I need to wash it soon)
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This is the shittiest poem I have ever written
Lol
C/c
If you're gonna say something stupid, don't say it.
There are times when things just wouldn't go
I hate the part at the end
When one of the main characters
Ends up dead
Sitting
Dying
At least I'm trying
Trying to snap
All of this darn
Crap
Apart
I see the light
At the end of the tunnel
I am the one moving
Stupid rocky funnel
Everything seems to be in the moment
I hate rhyming
Mirror mirror
On the wall
Who is the ______ of them all?
Make up your own adjective
I don't really care
This poem is crap
And so is my hair?
(I need to wash it soon)
-----------------------------
This is the shittiest poem I have ever written
Lol
C/c
If you're gonna say something stupid, don't say it.
Last edited by chimes- on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:03 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Lalalalala
by chung chin Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:56 pm
I like it! its very.. different, but in a good way
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Re: Lalalalala
by chimes- Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:58 pm
lol, I think thats it's crappy...
but y'know
I guess it lightened my mood.
but y'know
I guess it lightened my mood.
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Re: Lalalalala
by Satanic Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:02 pm
I'm gonna say something stupid, it sucked cuz i'm confuzed
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Re: Lalalalala
by chung chin Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:03 pm
guess wat? now we BOTH have boyfriends named thomas!lol
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Re: Lalalalala
by chimes- Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:03 pm
Lol, you ding dong!
I said that
but mehh.....
its true
I said that
but mehh.....
its true
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Re: Lalalalala
by chung chin Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:04 pm
you kno wat sat. i learned something very valuable today, you dont have something nice to say, dont say it
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Re: Lalalalala
by chung chin Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:05 pm
no, but he asked me out today and i said yes, so its only official TODAY
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Re: Lalalalala
by Satanic Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:07 pm
We all know and Jake wants to know whan ur going 2 2nd base
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Re: Lalalalala
by chung chin Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:14 pm
lol
i think sat might be turning into a shelhoe lol
i think sat might be turning into a shelhoe lol
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Re: Lalalalala
by Ruri Sat Feb 28, 2009 7:11 am
1) Off topic much?
2) Great poem actually. Not the best ever, or even your best ever, but it was actually fun to read xD
2) Great poem actually. Not the best ever, or even your best ever, but it was actually fun to read xD
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Re: Lalalalala
by Kazuma Sat Feb 28, 2009 12:13 pm
Wow.... If you guys don't stop double posting I'm going to take money away. To me that didn't seem like a poem. More like a bunch of thoughts put together but not in a poem orderly fashion.... you know what I mean:P
anyways nice job, happy to see you back chimes-
anyways nice job, happy to see you back chimes-
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